What is one sentence, from anything you have read this year, that you cannot get out of your head. Post it as it appears. No context. No source. Just the sentence.

The paragraph I keep rewriting. Two attempts below, gentle notes welcome. I think I am saying the same thing twice and only one of the sentences deserves to stay.

What are you unlearning about first drafts. I am unlearning that a first draft has to be embarrassed. Some of my best pages came from a first draft I did not apologise for.